Wednesday, January 2, 2013

You ripped my heart into Pieces

(c)Copyright Julieta Casabuena Facto Moffatt
Darwin, Australia - January 3, 2013

This is a song for you:

You pick me up with a broken heart
Help me mended it back
Only for you, only for you
To again rip it apart.

You've ripped my heart into pieces
The pain is so such
Oh, you've hurt me so much
My heart is crying non stop
But I am dazed and confused
Why I still love you this much.
chorus:

ALL I'VE BEEN DOING IS KEEP STITCHING BACK
THE SYNAPSES BETWEEN OUR HEARTS
WITH THE NEEDLE OF LOVING
I THREAD WITH UNDERSTANDING
I BUTTONED IT WITH LOTS OF CARING
AND A FULL STOP OF FORGIVING.

That is how much I love you
Friends see the bad side of you, and i see it too
They said, I deserve better than you
So I must get rid and forget you
As if I never met and knew you
For they said, I deserve better than you
All I've doing is keep crying over you.........
So they said, I deserve better than you
So I have to get rid and forget you...

Repeat chorus and last stanza...

Fade: but I am dazed and confused
because I still love you so.


An enduring love....a one and thousand stitches and more...

























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7 comments:

  1. julieta casabuena facto moffattJanuary 2, 2013 at 10:58 PM

    a song for you..

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  2. https://inspiredjoanofarcJanuary 3, 2013 at 5:11 AM

    I enjoyed your song very creative indeed, well done.

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    1. julieta casabuena facto moffattJanuary 6, 2013 at 3:30 AM

      thank you so much Jayne I do appreciate your comments...
      and i would like to take this opportunity to say to you, that you yourself is a good writer...
      i love reading your post. keep it up.

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  3. adhi dasJanuary 12, 2013 at 11:30 PM

    very touching...you pen well..GOD<3U

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    1. julieta casabuena facto moffattJanuary 15, 2013 at 3:44 PM

      thank you very much for your kind comments, Adhi Das.
      i wish you and your family a happy day!

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  4. Deb FeinMarch 8, 2013 at 3:51 PM

    I understand the feelings expressed in the poem. I love the imagery of stitching the heart together. Whoever he is, not worth it.

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    1. julieta casabuena facto moffattMarch 13, 2013 at 5:45 AM

      in true essence of the story....it is very hard to let him go...of all his faults he is such a wonderful person...
      but after so much consideration about him...I let go of all the possibilities of the future with him...up to this date we are still friends and will remind as is for life...

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